Wednesday, April 11, 2012

A Trip 'Two- gether'

A Trip ‘Two-gether’

Lets fly like birds dear
Touch the peaks, swim like a fish
Together here
                          Your words make me dance
                           My eyes travel with yours, far away
                           They see a future
That of trips and hope
Of flying kites and swinging ropes
One smile two love lips
                                                As the smile lits bright
                               The seed shall shine of music we made
                                Moments intimate

The flowers shall bloom
The spring colourful; we shall
Age, life and hearts alive
And when time comes love
To bid goodbye; I'll kiss thy lips
Touch thy soul life times
by Donald Campbell
© Aakriti
P.S: The above poem is in Haiku, that makes it different;) 


Unknown said...

loved it!

Kunal said...

One of our most beautiful poems...and one of my favorites. Truly!!

ye mausam ka asar hai..ya kisi aur ka? :P

CookieCrumbsInc. said...

Why does it have to always be goodbye in the end? :(

Aakriti said...

Thank you much Ankush and Kunal!

Pevee that's coz I believe and personally like happy endings. Your comment was very intriguing, I wonder why you didn't want it to be a happy one? You know, life at times is sad, so sad in reality, if words can provide some solace, it's good. But at the same time I do realise that 'happy' thoughts can bring pain, for the sheer reason that they feel to good to be true.

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