Monday, April 23, 2012

At the Seams

This post has been written after reading the splendid work of my fellow blogger friend Kunal. This poem is a 
reflection of his blog post titled "Or so it would Seem" . Before reading this one, perhaps dropping by at his place would be a good idea;) 

Thank You for writing it Kunal. It was a real pleasure. This poem, is to that voice and heart which is waiting to be found!.......

You know darling,
There are times,
When I wish to say so much to you,
And then I get lost……..
Lost, in love, fantasy,
A world which cures me
Of my insecurities deep within,
Yes I carry that smile all along,
It helps me spread cheer along the way,
And when I see in your eyes,
That alive deadness,
I see my self,
Are you me?
Or am I you?
Of the millions out there?
Like us, how many or few?
Do dead hearts strike?
Waiting to hear,
The other’s hush voice?
In the ‘no’s’, avert gazes,
                             If relationships could be built,
On this silent understanding,
I have of ‘we’,
I’d be the oyster to your pearl,
Can you trust or believe me?


Kunal said...

Thank you very much for making my morning.... I am going to link this one to my post...

Thank you truly for this super post...

Bikram said...

hmmm it was sad for me as i think if two people love each other then why do they need to ask these questions ..

if you know what i mean ..

a beautiful poem though , stems up a few emotions


Saumya Kulshreshtha said...

Insanely beautiful. I grow fonder of you each day....

Aakriti said...

Kunal: I think good writers like you deserve a lot more!:)

Bikram: Thank you so much. M glad you liked it:)

Saumya: I humbly accept ur fondness:)love

Tanvi said...

Aakriti I loved this post. Kunal did a wonderful job writing it.

You just made the way with those poetic words expressing the unsaid so profoundly.
It will remain unsaid, the way I wish,hope and believe I know it'll all be over. Someday.


Aakriti said...

Dear Tanvi..thank you so much for taking out time to come by:) And of course ur lovely words. is of all kinds..

Ruchi Jain said...

Superb and excellent, the way u asked question about me and you, everybody in love has the same curiosity...:)

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