This post has been written after reading the splendid work of my fellow blogger friend Kunal. This poem is a
reflection of his blog post titled "Or so it would Seem" . Before reading this one, perhaps dropping by at his place would be a good idea;)
Thank You for writing it Kunal. It was a real pleasure. This poem, is to that voice and heart which is waiting to be found!.......
You
know darling,
There
are times,
When
I wish to say so much to you,
And
then I get lost……..
Lost,
in love, fantasy,
A
world which cures me
Of
my insecurities deep within,
Yes
I carry that smile all along,
It helps
me spread cheer along the way,
And
when I see in your eyes,
That
alive deadness,
I see
my self,
Are
you me?
Or am
I you?
Of the
millions out there?
Like
us, how many or few?
Do dead
hearts strike?
Waiting
to hear,
The
other’s hush voice?
In the
‘no’s’, avert gazes,
If relationships could be built,
On this silent understanding,
I have of ‘we’,
I’d be the oyster to your pearl,
Can you trust or believe me?
©Aakriti
7 comments:
Thank you very much for making my morning.... I am going to link this one to my post...
Thank you truly for this super post...
hmmm it was sad for me as i think if two people love each other then why do they need to ask these questions ..
if you know what i mean ..
a beautiful poem though , stems up a few emotions
Bikram's
Insanely beautiful. I grow fonder of you each day....
Kunal: I think good writers like you deserve a lot more!:)
Bikram: Thank you so much. M glad you liked it:)
Saumya: I humbly accept ur fondness:)love
Aakriti I loved this post. Kunal did a wonderful job writing it.
You just made the way with those poetic words expressing the unsaid so profoundly.
It will remain unsaid, the way I wish,hope and believe I know it'll all be over. Someday.
Cheers,
Dear Tanvi..thank you so much for taking out time to come by:) And of course ur lovely words.
Sigh....love is of all kinds..
Superb and excellent, the way u asked question about me and you, everybody in love has the same curiosity...:)
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