Haiku Heights just gave me a prompt that I so relate to. Here's it...
Endurance
I endure you dear
O mighty as a mountain
A sailor will sail
The tears above may
Speak weakness; down below they shower
The roots of the bud
The song of thy lord
The strength this blood flows; knows the sun
A flower shall bloom
Aakriti
PS: Song that inspires me: Come thou fount of
16 comments:
awesome yaar !
good work.
I like the first one more.. you write well ..I am happy to be here..
Enchanting, like a well-loved hymn.
The first one is my choice also ~ admire your strength of your faith ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
liked it both post and song..
i like the ssailor with the sail
two senryu dedicated to the novelist
a sailor will sail
the roots of a bud
a flower shall bloom
all nicely linked together, showing the emotional meaning.
Great haiku and a relevant song!
Hank
It is indeed a beauty! I heard the song...very soothing and peaceful! :)
I loveddd the first one and really liked the second one =D didnt get the third one :p
Enjoyed your writing - the first is my favourite. Thank you for sharing with us.
loved the first one .. actually the second one also is beautiful , true tears may speak of weakness but inside new roots are budding :)
thanks for sharing
Bikram's
This piece really inspires me to compose one of my own . Aren't you amazing?
Nicely-worded and thought-provoking. The first one is my favourite. As comments with URL are not allowed, here's mine: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/03/endurance-haiku/
Best, M.
Love the first and second - very powerful!
Dear All: Thank you so much for all the appreciation:)
I wish I could have thanked every reader individually, I hope a biiiig thank you will encompass all ( just for a while) since I got lot of work to do!!:)
Happy New month!!:)
Aakriti
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