Sunday, March 18, 2012



Blue are the tears and
Blue is the sky; the distance
Between me and you
 Blue is the water
Blue are my jeans, now faded
Like your memory

Blue is the lightness
Blue too the dark, a space where
People coincide

P.S: I know that a Haiku doesn't rhyme, but this one just went with the flow:)


Vinay Leo R. said...

Quite beautiful, Aakriti :) The last one especially! Loved them.

Dr Mandeep Khanuja said...

You really are someone to watch out for ! No it wasnt a haiku but equally precise and enjoyable !

Anonymous said...

very nice write

senryu of blues & honesty

Rachit said...

beautiful :)
Weakest LINK

Anonymous said...

Great job! :)

Anonymous said...

Love your take on it!

Bikram said...

and my favourite color is blueeeee tooooo :)


Bhargav Bhatt said...

a space where
People coincide

....hmmmmm whats happening.... ????some 2 weeks back i tried read your blogs but was unable to open ... even left you message but may be the poetess was so busy.. :)

sweet one again... kp writing..

N.S.Kirti said...

brilliant haiku set Aakriti. loved them, especially the second one :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Memory and jeans both faded...brilliant!

Feathered Sky of Blue

Kunal said...

Each one better than the other! :P

Blue is the sky..understood..
Blue are my jeans..understood again..
Blue is the bhi understood...

But Blue too the dark? kaise?

Rohit Singh Jain said...

ANother reason for me to love the color Blue. Lovely.

The Solitary Writer said...

Have been reading quite a lot Haiku's these days and its too good...well written Aakriti

Aakriti said...

DEAR ALL:)Thank you so much!! I biiig thank you. I just wrote these with a streamy flow, had no idea they would be loved so much:)

Bhargav: Busy, Yes I'm..but I really dunno why u weren't able to comment. Welcome back! It's nice to have my very first few readers back:)

Kunal: :) Haloooo... Welcome to India;) and hey I answered ur question:)

TSW: Haloooo:):) Thank u for liking my place and following....yup...its kinda nice that many ppl are trying out haiku:) It gives one a different kind of space to express

Becca, Zongrik, Kirti,Bikram, Pale Blue Dot,Magical Mystical Teacher: Gracias:):)

Aakriti said...

Leo: All thanks to you, you know for what;)

Mandeep: I'm glad you like my writings:)

Unknown said...

Wow!! you are amazing!

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