What if…Repeat Mode?
This heart sure has its reasons to live,
To live, to love, and then to survive,
Amidst elation, breakups, deep gorges and high tides,
And as the reel runs,
The music that flows,
Melodies of trance,
Of manic and depressive mode,
The flute plays all through,
Sometimes too invisible to hear,
And just when the vibes comes closer,
The songs play on a repeat mode!
The songs of the past forlorn,
Of that never meant to happen,
But that which eventually does,
The song too close to the heart,
It plays and aches and plays again,
And just when it plays on a different scale,
The pianist, insecure, changes her sail,
Onto a different route,
Not too distant from where it meant,
A li’l near to feel secure,
But the past song plays aloud hidden…..
Aakriti
12 comments:
This is fantastic and so beautifully penned, Aakriti! Profound yet something we can all relate to in the journey of our lives. Loved it! Beautiful presentation as well ~ perfect image! Your blog template is so beautiful. I have an affinity for parchment and calligraphy :)
**The song too close to the heart,
It plays and aches and plays again,
And just when it plays on a different scale,
The pianist, insecure, changes her sail,
Exemplary. Your pieces are exemplary, some of them. This one reminded me of Sand and Foam by Gibran.
A li’l near to feel secure,
But the past song plays aloud hidden…..noboday cant move too far. A eloquent poem.
mmmmmmmmm I loved it
"The flute plays all through,
Sometimes too invisible to hear,
And just when the vibes comes closer,
The songs play on a repeat mode!
The songs of the past forlor"
it is a beautiful poem
Bikram's
Long time..since you wrote like this.. :)
The exams and assignments were keeping you busy and now, since you have time, you come up with this mesmerizing work combining fusing heart and music into life.
I would say, I like the complete last few lines...
The flute plays all through,
Sometimes too invisible to hear,
And just when the vibes comes closer,
The songs play on a repeat mode!
The songs of the past forlorn,
Of that never meant to happen,
But that which eventually does,
The song too close to the heart,
It plays and aches and plays again,
And just when it plays on a different scale,
The pianist, insecure, changes her sail,
Onto a different route,
Not too distant from where it meant,
A li’l near to feel secure,
But the past song plays aloud hidden…..
There is a amazing flow and they combine different elements together beautifully :)
Enjoy the holidays. :)
And I am your 100th follower!! Any prizes? ;)
Dear Fiona!!I loooove ur name:) Its so musical:) Thank u so much. I'm fond of calligraphy too, thought would learn in this year, but well the place I went to turned to be bad:P I m also fond of cursive writing and yes always in search of a perfect pitcha to compliment my words:)
Merry Xmas and a fab 2012 to u :)
Hey Crysty:):) Thank u so much dear:) And I still gotta read Sand and Foam by Gibran:) will gt back to u soon on that:D
For now Have a rockayn December babeh!!!;) Go GOa!!!8) hot and happening place to be at this time of the year.
PS: Are u attending Sunburn?;)
Thank u so much Ruchi:) nice to see u on my blog:)
Bikram: Hmmmmmmm....;) So glad u loved it:)Merry Xmas!!:)
Kunal....bahut bahut shukriya! I guess it was time for creative energies to come out;):)
Ankush....sure...of course I never let ppl go without thanking them...Big sUrprise on my new Post::) for u...U come under special bloggy frnd category ;)
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