Monday, December 5, 2011

My......Space


Heyloz to all!!:) I’m here (again) with another Haiku of mine. Leo gives us the prompt as “Space” on his just for haiku blog called HaikuHeights. Here’s mine…

My.. Space


As you give me space
To breathe live smile cry; I think
Can you set me free


Aakriti

16 comments:

Cяystal said...

Give you space and yet set you free, sounds like a toughie . :D
And once more, you weave magic with a haiku!

CookieCrumbsInc. said...

Love the thought, one that I try to live by:)

PhilO♥ said...

Wow. This was short. Yet lovely :)

Neha said...

Nice haiku. Everybody needs personal space at times.

Bikram said...

nice thought .. hope they do set one free
the picture of the sunflower is bright and beautiful

Bikram's

Susie Clevenger said...

great haiku...love the image and words...give me space...i think you can set me free...

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

hope that heart starts flying again. feelings well presented.

Thanks for visiting my blog and for your kind comment, Akriti. You asked me about the 5-7-5 syllable Haiku well that's the traditional form of Haiku which is presented in 5-7-5 form and the other 3 line set without this rule is the contemporary Haiku. But there are many writers and Haiku journals who strictly follow the traditional form. I prefer the free style one since they allow the poet to present their thoughts flexibly without any stress.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Love this one. Great Haiku.


Melanie

Aakriti said...

Crysty....well...life makes things easier to interpret with time, u knw...and well somethings get tangled up with tie as well...;)

Aakriti said...

Bikram...thank u :) yes...someone's waiting to be freed from the invisible cluthches!!

Aakriti said...

Hey Neha....hie..thnks for cuming by...'at times'hmm...I gotta think of that;)

Aakriti said...

Hey Melanie...:) thank u

Aakriti said...

Heya Susie:) Thank u for cuming by and for liking the haiku as well:)

Aakriti said...

Hey Priyanka,...thanks for the info...got a long way to learn more abt haiku...:)

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

cool Haiku.

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

invite you to check us out, share a piece of your poetry with us today, smiles.

keep it up.
Hope to see you in.

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