Heyloz to all!!:) I’m here (again) with another Haiku of mine. Leo gives us the prompt as “Space” on his just for haiku blog called HaikuHeights. Here’s mine…
My….. Space
As you give me space
To breathe live smile cry; I think
Can you set me free
Aakriti
16 comments:
Give you space and yet set you free, sounds like a toughie . :D
And once more, you weave magic with a haiku!
Love the thought, one that I try to live by:)
Wow. This was short. Yet lovely :)
Nice haiku. Everybody needs personal space at times.
nice thought .. hope they do set one free
the picture of the sunflower is bright and beautiful
Bikram's
great haiku...love the image and words...give me space...i think you can set me free...
hope that heart starts flying again. feelings well presented.
Thanks for visiting my blog and for your kind comment, Akriti. You asked me about the 5-7-5 syllable Haiku well that's the traditional form of Haiku which is presented in 5-7-5 form and the other 3 line set without this rule is the contemporary Haiku. But there are many writers and Haiku journals who strictly follow the traditional form. I prefer the free style one since they allow the poet to present their thoughts flexibly without any stress.
Love this one. Great Haiku.
Melanie
Crysty....well...life makes things easier to interpret with time, u knw...and well somethings get tangled up with tie as well...;)
Bikram...thank u :) yes...someone's waiting to be freed from the invisible cluthches!!
Hey Neha....hie..thnks for cuming by...'at times'hmm...I gotta think of that;)
Hey Melanie...:) thank u
Heya Susie:) Thank u for cuming by and for liking the haiku as well:)
Hey Priyanka,...thanks for the info...got a long way to learn more abt haiku...:)
cool Haiku.
invite you to check us out, share a piece of your poetry with us today, smiles.
keep it up.
Hope to see you in.
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