Lachak
Ae lachak ye deewani,
Ae lachak ye mastani,
Thumakti hui si hulchul,
Matakti hui si baarish,
Paton ki sansein,
Baarish ki yeh rimjhim,
Ankhon ki sohbat,
Hothon ki pyaas,
Yeh lachak-ae- zindagani,
Yeh taalein nayi aur purani…….
Yeh tharrati si khamoshi,
Yeh khamoshi-ae- natkhat,
Yeh kirne sooraj ki,
Badlon mein sharmati,
Aur dheere se,
Ek behalati nadi ki tarah,
Mujh par baras jati……
Aakriti
7 comments:
Kya khoob kahaa! "Tharrati si khamoshi" , so much like deafening silence na?
Liked it liked it, SO much. <3
I loved this one .. sweet cute and beautiful
reminded me of a old 70's song felt like dancing :)
Bikram's
you wrote it???.....heard the word lachak after many days..........the poem is lovely...has a implicit sence of exitement and naughtiness...gr8 one
Paras: Ofcourse, I did:)This blog is all MY work and if I do borrows someone's lines, I credit them:)
Glad u liked the poem...
PS: I just got a new follower today...is it you?
Hey Crysty....thanks ...deafening silence..umm.no...but happy unnerving silence for sure:)
heya Bikram....really? kaunsa gana? zara humein bhi toh pta chale??
glad u liked reading it...dance kia ki nahi;)??
the song is not same as yours .. but its the tune that came to mind when i read the poem .. :)
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