Saturday, February 11, 2012

Splendid Saturday: I desire..


Another Haiku up at Haiku Heights....prompt "desire";)

I desire..

Will you believe if
I say I had you in mind
Since I know not when

A subtle sweet thought
Which at times brought tears
Eyes still long for you

10 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Well, emotions and feelings splashed here..

Ayushi said...

Desire depicted perfectly Aakriti :)

PS - Why did you choose another shade of brown for the new template ? It does not give a new feel. Choose a color that you never thought you would :):P

Grace said...

Nice capture of emotions ~

Aakriti said...

Thank u Ramesh Sir and Grace:)

Ayu: I sensed a lil inhibition:p but now that u Encourage me lemme splash the brightest of the colors sometime soon;)

carol l mckenna said...

desire does connote emotions ~ well done haiku ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

Karen said...

Beautifully crafted with such emotion.

PhilO♥ said...

The longing lingers all the time, but the heart can't take it :) You penned it well :)

Ayushi said...

I'll be waiting :)

Anonymous said...

very very nice!

Vinay Leo R. said...

I can relate. The wait is endless I feel. for the heart chooses not to let go of that longing, that desire...

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