Its good to stay in touch with words. Words love being touched, felt, expressed, written and most importantly being read…. For
the prompt Stone at haikuheights…here
is what I have to say:
Year
after year I
Melted
my candle of love
Received
not one glance
That
rock which lies there
Is
not just a stone; it speaks
Of
journeys untold
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| Picture taken from here |
6 comments:
Fantastic =)
I am
http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/
Lovely poem. Precise and beautiful use of words. Keep writing. :)
Regards,
Anand
http://godoffinethings.blogspot.in/
Adore second haiku and photo.
Oh yes, if stones could speak, what stories they could tell! Nicely done!
Year after year I
Melted my candle of love
Received not one glance
I LOVE this romantic haiku. Here is my response poem:
my wax turned to smoke
fire flickered sputtered and died
you are truly blind
Thank u so much Anand:) yep. will keep writing.
Alice: Kudos to you for writing such a fantastic haiku full of anguish and pain in return.Mashallah!!:) Thanks a lot for coming by.
Grace: Thanks:)
Poet Laundry: thanks:)
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