Yellows Vanilla Peoples...the sun is bright and super warm, and I hope the light enters your lives brightening it more than before:) This is the magic of the Winter Sun:):)
So today I join up at Sensational Haiku Wednesday to write a haiku. The prompt she gives us is "Absence". Borrowing the pic from Twisha's awesome blog. Here it goes....:)
So today I join up at Sensational Haiku Wednesday to write a haiku. The prompt she gives us is "Absence". Borrowing the pic from Twisha's awesome blog. Here it goes....:)
Absent so quiet
Piercing silence; recover
Soon enough in time
34 comments:
lovely!
thats what haikus are like..short but immensely powerful :)
Woaaah.Beautiuful. And the pic goes very well!!
Twish.....yeh toh apki picture hunting ka nateeja hai....warna yeh blogpost adhoori si rehti..!!:)<3 Thanks sweetheart!
Hey Farzy...:) thank u:) yes the challenge to express more than what words cn contain gets well absorbed in a haiku:)
Haiku eh!! Learnt something new today. Nice one. :)
Short, simple yet so profound!
Haiku it really is!
Loved it.
Thanks for visiting my blog
@Kumar: Thank u:)
Hey Red...thanks for dropping by here as well:) glad u liked the haiku!
I have started liking Haikus...there is a blogger called MeethiMirchi who is very good with Haiku, may be you should read him :)
http://meethimirchi.wordpress.com/
this is his link...and i will pass yours to him...cheers
Time's the best healer. Nice one.
Inspiring :)
Thank u so much Anthony:)
Hey Chintan.....thnk u ...will sure have a look:) u are kind enough a via media between both of us..haha:D
TIME is a healer they say .. but then it takes a Long time for that TIME to come :)
Very atmospheric. Lovely
HAIKUS ARE EASY
BUT SOMETIMES THEY DON'T MAKE SENSE
REFRIGERATOR
(Not original. this is a funny Haiku)
waise yours was lovely :)
Thank u Madeleine...for coming at Yarn of~ words and for liking the Haiku:)
well done. great photo, too.
I love it when people say SO much in such few words .. Haikus are intriguing. gotta try them out soon!
BTW sorry for not commenting on the last story. I did did love it! You get better at weaving the plot every darn time. Way to go. :*
Kalpak....thank u ...rules na pta hone ke baad bhi haiku likhna toh koi apse seekhe!!!;) Yes...it was very funnn-e...so much that m forwarding to my other frnds as well:P
Hey Crysty....thank u:) but u urself are pro at writing and expressing in such few words:)...btw are u talking abt 'Friendly Conflicts" post? that was not a plot dear...but a part of my life..
Yes, time heals all wounds.. (almost all anyways).
Btw, a note to readers also, the plural of haiku is "haiku" itself, not "haikus" :D
hopefully time will heal...but absence is so painful...great haiku
Short but intense!
Hey Susie....thnk u for coming by... I agree with Bikram when he says that it takes a long time for things to heal....but yes...wounds do get healed, and absences do get filled:)
Becca....that's the beauty of a haiku..
Mijayami: Thank u:)
Bikram: time takes its own time to heal wounds and scars....some that lie at the surface, and other's which are deep there in our psyche...and interestingly there are some wounds we "think" to have healed.....but only to reveal their realities later....
So few little words
still definingly piercing,
Attempt, was my to call.
Aakriti, thanks for introducing me to the world of Haiku! Am so enjoying it!
Dear Pooja...pleasure is all mine and for us to share too....:) I'm so glad u like reading haiku:)and hey what a lovely haiku rply to my haiku:) ( would love to read more of urs too;)
Really nice :). A haiku is so powerful in so few words. And I read the other haiku you attempted, and quite an finesse you have gained already in this art. Kudos!
Hey Saumya....<3<3:) woaaa...u are crediting me with too much in my initial attempts itself dear...there's a long way to go....:) kudos to u too:)
yes, soon enough
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