Search (In') Soul
Life is a treasure of abundance,
The keys hard to find,
To unlock the doors of the soul…….
Years are spent repenting,
That which we did and that which we behold,
And of all the moments few,
With transient smiles and glittery eyes,
Which vanish as they come,
Like dews in the morn,
Of an everglowing igniting sun.
In the sparkle of the stars,
And that one fluorescent bulb,
The night, a sheath of blankness,
A mist of solitude,
The clarity beckons the soul,
The search, an endless one to reach,
In moments of thorny steps,
Look for petals, you seek,
And upon a many miles,
A distance hard to traverse,
You shall fall upon a flower,
That’s life thorny and pretty…!
Aakriti
15 comments:
first of all WOW on the picture its beautiful
and now WOW on the poem to go with it
so true ...
beautiful loved it
Bikram's
Thorny and pretty :)
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Life is a abundance for everyone.
It takes a lifetime to realize this, for some,
When we walk on thorns and see us bleeding..
The flowers grow, few early, few late, but still awesome.
Life says, come to me..
But, we are busy running away..
What we seek is within us..
Very few think that way..
Heya Bikram...thank u soo much..I knew the pic was apt for the poem and so the two go hand in hand:)
Heyaz Kunal...lovely lines..:) i knw ppl who cum under my chatro chaya...get transformed into poets!!;)
Crystal...thnk u for the likes the likes...me likes that u cums here to reads my stuffs;)
Rahul...:)
Wow...that's life for sure :)
lovely.
powerful words, well done.
support by making 18 comments to your peers.
beautiful reasoning.
amazing to see how your words paint vivid images.
The Orange Tree, Summer : Thank u:) Visited more than 18 links:)
Tiffiny: I;m glad they were able to evoke imagery:) Thank u for coming by!
Sub: :) THank u
cool poetry.
Happy Rally.
Hello.
Please excuse my lateness in returning the visit. My schedule as been hectic this week.
Thought-provoking indeed.
The image is awesome & fits perfectly with the poem.
Nicely done Aakriti!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Your comments are appreciated.
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This poem was quite simply STUNNING and FANTASTIC!! :] Very glad I stopped by! I love the images in your poem and I just related to it so much. I will be back! Thank you! Oh dew and the thorn, so true! :] xx
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