Saturday, March 24, 2012

I endure....


Haiku Heights just gave me a prompt that I so relate to. Here's it...

Endurance
I endure you dear
O mighty as a mountain
 A sailor will sail
The tears above may
Speak weakness; down below they shower
The roots of the bud

The song of thy lord
The strength this blood flows; knows the sun
A flower shall bloom


Aakriti
PS: Song that inspires me: Come thou fount of

16 comments:

Deepak Karthik said...

awesome yaar !
good work.

Ramesh Sood said...

I like the first one more.. you write well ..I am happy to be here..

Bruce Miller said...

Enchanting, like a well-loved hymn.

carol l mckenna said...

The first one is my choice also ~ admire your strength of your faith ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

sumukh bansal said...

liked it both post and song..

Anonymous said...

i like the ssailor with the sail

two senryu dedicated to the novelist

Frank Watson said...

a sailor will sail
the roots of a bud
a flower shall bloom

all nicely linked together, showing the emotional meaning.

kaykuala said...

Great haiku and a relevant song!

Hank

Unknown said...

It is indeed a beauty! I heard the song...very soothing and peaceful! :)

Aliza Khan said...

I loveddd the first one and really liked the second one =D didnt get the third one :p

Ellecee said...

Enjoyed your writing - the first is my favourite. Thank you for sharing with us.

Bikram said...

loved the first one .. actually the second one also is beautiful , true tears may speak of weakness but inside new roots are budding :)


thanks for sharing

Bikram's

Cяystal said...

This piece really inspires me to compose one of my own . Aren't you amazing?

Mariya Koleva said...

Nicely-worded and thought-provoking. The first one is my favourite. As comments with URL are not allowed, here's mine: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/03/endurance-haiku/

Best, M.

Anonymous said...

Love the first and second - very powerful!

Aakriti said...

Dear All: Thank you so much for all the appreciation:)

I wish I could have thanked every reader individually, I hope a biiiig thank you will encompass all ( just for a while) since I got lot of work to do!!:)

Happy New month!!:)
Aakriti

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