Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Absence

Yellows Vanilla Peoples...the sun is bright and super warm, and I hope the light enters your lives brightening it more than before:) This is the magic of the Winter Sun:):)

So today I join up at Sensational Haiku Wednesday to write a haiku. The prompt she gives us is "Absence". Borrowing the pic from Twisha's awesome blog. Here it goes....:)



Absent so quiet
Piercing silence; recover
Soon enough in time

34 comments:

Defiant Princess said...

lovely!
thats what haikus are like..short but immensely powerful :)

One Life. Many Moments. said...

Woaaah.Beautiuful. And the pic goes very well!!

Aakriti said...

Twish.....yeh toh apki picture hunting ka nateeja hai....warna yeh blogpost adhoori si rehti..!!:)<3 Thanks sweetheart!

Aakriti said...

Hey Farzy...:) thank u:) yes the challenge to express more than what words cn contain gets well absorbed in a haiku:)

Unknown said...

Haiku eh!! Learnt something new today. Nice one. :)

Red Handed said...

Short, simple yet so profound!
Haiku it really is!
Loved it.
Thanks for visiting my blog

Aakriti said...

@Kumar: Thank u:)

Aakriti said...

Hey Red...thanks for dropping by here as well:) glad u liked the haiku!

Chintan said...

I have started liking Haikus...there is a blogger called MeethiMirchi who is very good with Haiku, may be you should read him :)

http://meethimirchi.wordpress.com/

this is his link...and i will pass yours to him...cheers

anthonynorth said...

Time's the best healer. Nice one.

Anonymous said...

Inspiring :)

Aakriti said...

Thank u so much Anthony:)

Aakriti said...

Hey Chintan.....thnk u ...will sure have a look:) u are kind enough a via media between both of us..haha:D

Bikram said...

TIME is a healer they say .. but then it takes a Long time for that TIME to come :)

scribbleandedit.blogspot.co.uk said...

Very atmospheric. Lovely

kalpak n. said...

HAIKUS ARE EASY
BUT SOMETIMES THEY DON'T MAKE SENSE
REFRIGERATOR

(Not original. this is a funny Haiku)

kalpak n. said...

waise yours was lovely :)

Aakriti said...

Thank u Madeleine...for coming at Yarn of~ words and for liking the Haiku:)

Mijayami said...

well done. great photo, too.

Cяystal said...

I love it when people say SO much in such few words .. Haikus are intriguing. gotta try them out soon!
BTW sorry for not commenting on the last story. I did did love it! You get better at weaving the plot every darn time. Way to go. :*

Aakriti said...

Kalpak....thank u ...rules na pta hone ke baad bhi haiku likhna toh koi apse seekhe!!!;) Yes...it was very funnn-e...so much that m forwarding to my other frnds as well:P

Aakriti said...

Hey Crysty....thank u:) but u urself are pro at writing and expressing in such few words:)...btw are u talking abt 'Friendly Conflicts" post? that was not a plot dear...but a part of my life..

Vinay Leo R. said...

Yes, time heals all wounds.. (almost all anyways).

Btw, a note to readers also, the plural of haiku is "haiku" itself, not "haikus" :D

Susie Clevenger said...

hopefully time will heal...but absence is so painful...great haiku

Anonymous said...

Short but intense!

Aakriti said...

Hey Susie....thnk u for coming by... I agree with Bikram when he says that it takes a long time for things to heal....but yes...wounds do get healed, and absences do get filled:)

Aakriti said...

Becca....that's the beauty of a haiku..

Aakriti said...

Mijayami: Thank u:)

Aakriti said...

Bikram: time takes its own time to heal wounds and scars....some that lie at the surface, and other's which are deep there in our psyche...and interestingly there are some wounds we "think" to have healed.....but only to reveal their realities later....

Unknown said...

So few little words
still definingly piercing,
Attempt, was my to call.

Aakriti, thanks for introducing me to the world of Haiku! Am so enjoying it!

Aakriti said...

Dear Pooja...pleasure is all mine and for us to share too....:) I'm so glad u like reading haiku:)and hey what a lovely haiku rply to my haiku:) ( would love to read more of urs too;)

Saumya Kulshreshtha said...

Really nice :). A haiku is so powerful in so few words. And I read the other haiku you attempted, and quite an finesse you have gained already in this art. Kudos!

Aakriti said...

Hey Saumya....<3<3:) woaaa...u are crediting me with too much in my initial attempts itself dear...there's a long way to go....:) kudos to u too:)

Anonymous said...

yes, soon enough

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