Blue
Blue are the tears and
Blue is the sky; the distance
Between me and you
Blue is the water
Blue are my jeans, now faded
Like your memory
Blue is the lightness
Blue too the dark, a space where
People coincide
©Aakriti
P.S: I know that a Haiku doesn't rhyme, but this one just went with the flow:)
16 comments:
Quite beautiful, Aakriti :) The last one especially! Loved them.
You really are someone to watch out for ! No it wasnt a haiku but equally precise and enjoyable !
very nice write
senryu of blues & honesty
beautiful :)
Weakest LINK
Great job! :)
Love your take on it!
and my favourite color is blueeeee tooooo :)
Bikram's
a space where
People coincide
....hmmmmm whats happening.... ????some 2 weeks back i tried read your blogs but was unable to open ... even left you message but may be the poetess was so busy.. :)
sweet one again... kp writing..
brilliant haiku set Aakriti. loved them, especially the second one :)
Memory and jeans both faded...brilliant!
Feathered Sky of Blue
Each one better than the other! :P
Blue is the sky..understood..
Blue are my jeans..understood again..
Blue is the lightness...ye bhi understood...
But Blue too the dark? kaise?
ANother reason for me to love the color Blue. Lovely.
Have been reading quite a lot Haiku's these days and its too good...well written Aakriti
DEAR ALL:)Thank you so much!! I biiig thank you. I just wrote these with a streamy flow, had no idea they would be loved so much:)
Bhargav: Busy, Yes I'm..but I really dunno why u weren't able to comment. Welcome back! It's nice to have my very first few readers back:)
Kunal: :) Haloooo... Welcome to India;) and hey I answered ur question:)
TSW: Haloooo:):) Thank u for liking my place and following....yup...its kinda nice that many ppl are trying out haiku:) It gives one a different kind of space to express
Becca, Zongrik, Kirti,Bikram, Pale Blue Dot,Magical Mystical Teacher: Gracias:):)
Leo: All thanks to you, you know for what;)
Mandeep: I'm glad you like my writings:)
Wow!! you are amazing!
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