Saturday, January 28, 2012

Dream On


Dream

I have one to fly
My wings open, reach the sky
Where I touch sun rays

PS: I know a Haiku doesn't rhyme, but once in a while, it's good to twist the rules according to our ways;)!
Happy Weekend!

3 comments:

Kunal said...

I have a question...in this haiku..

Does 'one' in the first line has a special meaning or it signifies something in particular. I think yes, but I am not sure what exactly.

And about rhyming haikus, I was actually thinking on the same lines... :P

Good to twist the rule a bit here and there.. :D

Subhrashis Adhikari said...

oh, it is still gr8 :)

Aakriti said...

Kunal: One refers to 'A Dream' to fly to:)

Sub: haha. Thank you;)

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