Darmiyaan
Saat samudra paar
Ek Khushi ke pahaar par,
Bhaithi ek Muskaan,
Gehri soch mein……….
"Woh kya Khushi,
Jo dil se na aye?
Woh kya chehak,
Jo chahekne mein hichkichaye?
Woh kya baatein,
Jo boli na jayein?
Woh kya pal,
Jab hum mein aur tum mein,
Yeh darmiyaan……..
Tham sa jayein?"
©©Aakriti
4 comments:
so true woh kya khushi to dil ne na aye .. so true
lovely but sad poem :)
Bikram's
As good as it can get , after all you wrote it :)
Kuch baatein unkahin si,
kuch labj unsune se ,
bas kuch lamhe jaane pehchaane,
main tum me aur tum mujh me,
bas kuch aise kho jaane,
samay ki gahrai me aur teri parchhai me,
ye lamhe ye darmiyan yuhin beet jaane. :)
brought a smile to me :)
Bikram and Ankush:Glad you two liked it:)
Suree: Aap toh mujhse bhi ek kadam age ho janaab hindi poetry mein....do write one...would love to read it!:)
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