Before you go ahead reading my lines....listen to the song attached, that's what inspired me to write this one.....
Life brings us down,
It pulls the end too hard,
And like a loose thread unwound,
It crushes, crumples the woven piece….altogether…..
The body wears with age,
And so does the mind loses its attention,
A blur, A haze, dizziness so bizarre……..
The greys, the blacks, the darkness…..
And then the echo calls us back,
To love, to live to shout,
To breathe with our full lungs……
The unknown people become sweet strangers,
Passing by our knowables,
Living through our words,
Knowing our dreamy world,
And on the edge, I know my reality,
That which is alike yet away from what I show,
And then my eyes glisten in the shine,
Looking beyond the ocean, too far and wide,
Not knowing how to swim,
Not knowing the undersea world,
I dive, fighting all the odds……..struggling to be ALIVE…….
The dolphins join the dance,
The turtles play with bubbles,
And my life is lived befriending …….. my ECHO.
Bapre baap!!!!!:-) Have fun with ur new best buddy,echo.......
Poetry depicts whats in our mind and soul!And once again i find u so similar to my own self :O
or maybe it is all a common girls aspirations?
jo bhi ho..nicely penned work :))
TOO good :I
Happy Diwali, honey!
brilliant poetry Aakriti!
I love the song that inspired you to write.. I often fall asleep listening to it :)
Hey Crysty...thnk u soo much:)
Hey Sarah...achaji?? oh!!!:O...temme what and how u interpreted this poem...coz its indeed a deep one..and what aspirations of "girls" do u get from this one;)..pls share:)
Hey Farzana...thnk u so much...well I ve been listening to Echo every single day since the day I posted it here...thnks to fellow bloggers Risha and Twisha ( sound like twin sisters..haha;) they shared it on FB...that's how it happened to me:) and well then came up this poem:P...
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