Saturday, April 28, 2012

I trust You





If my trust brought me
To you my friend, I wonder
What my love will do

5 comments:

Saumya Kulshreshtha said...

I don't know if this sounds cheesy, but my heart skipped a beat when the simplicity and the depth of this Haiku struck me. I'm thankful you made me read it.
More and more in love with you each passing day....

Aakriti said...

Thank u for such lovely words Saumya:) and I only hope that our love for the other grows by each day:) I have a lot to give and I never mind receiving more:*<3 ;)

Kunal said...

TRUST

Precious Priceless Pure
Tough to hold, Tough to give. And,
Shines the path in Dark.

Aakriti said...

wow!! A haiku for a haiku;)
This one was magnificent. Just one thing. No caps, no fullstops, only a semi colon or a colon to break the haiku:)

Kunal said...

Will keep that in mind from next time..that is if i write another one. :P

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