Ae lachak ye deewani,
Ae lachak ye mastani,
Thumakti hui si hulchul,
Matakti hui si baarish,
Paton ki sansein,
Baarish ki yeh rimjhim,
Ankhon ki sohbat,
Hothon ki pyaas,
Yeh lachak-ae- zindagani,
Yeh taalein nayi aur purani…….
Yeh tharrati si khamoshi,
Yeh khamoshi-ae- natkhat,
Yeh kirne sooraj ki,
Badlon mein sharmati,
Aur dheere se,
Ek behalati nadi ki tarah,
Mujh par baras jati……
Kya khoob kahaa! "Tharrati si khamoshi" , so much like deafening silence na?
Liked it liked it, SO much. <3
I loved this one .. sweet cute and beautiful
reminded me of a old 70's song felt like dancing :)
you wrote it???.....heard the word lachak after many days..........the poem is lovely...has a implicit sence of exitement and naughtiness...gr8 one
Paras: Ofcourse, I did:)This blog is all MY work and if I do borrows someone's lines, I credit them:)
Glad u liked the poem...
PS: I just got a new follower today...is it you?
Hey Crysty....thanks ...deafening silence..umm.no...but happy unnerving silence for sure:)
heya Bikram....really? kaunsa gana? zara humein bhi toh pta chale??
glad u liked reading it...dance kia ki nahi;)??
the song is not same as yours .. but its the tune that came to mind when i read the poem .. :)
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